Sunday, February 17, 2008

sun shining -
on the blue sky
moon's thumbprint
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1 comment:

josh said...

I like 'moon's thumbprint'. In my mind, if the sky is blue, it's implied that the sun is shining, so L1 falls a little flat for me.

Playing with yours:

a thumbprint
on the window pane—
day moon

Strong comparative juxt., John. Nice work.

February 20, 2008 at 5:11 PM

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