Wednesday, February 20, 2008

the snowdrops
shaking their heads
always shaking their heads
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3 comments:

josh said...

i like the repitition here.

and i can see the movement.

nice.

February 20, 2008 at 4:56 PM
Gwil W said...

thanks josh, they're on a corner at the side of the house where there's always a breeze,i mean 'always' - don't know where it comes from

February 20, 2008 at 8:24 PM
jem said...

That repetition really works. The second time you read it differently - more wistfully. Great stuff!

February 23, 2008 at 1:46 PM

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