Wednesday, February 20, 2008

the snowdrops
shaking their heads
always shaking their heads

3 comments:

josh said...

i like the repitition here.

and i can see the movement.

nice.

Poet-in-Residence said...

thanks josh, they're on a corner at the side of the house where there's always a breeze,i mean 'always' - don't know where it comes from

jem said...

That repetition really works. The second time you read it differently - more wistfully. Great stuff!