Spring Haiku 2008: LOVE MESSAGE

Monday, February 25, 2008

His message to meet
at moonrise among the flowers
sparkles a secret
on her smiling face passion
glows with charming fervour

--R.K.SINGH

Isabel said...: Poingnant; February 25, 2008 at 4:39 PM
Gwil W said...: 'message to meet at moonrise' is good - a more than intersting first line; February 25, 2008 at 9:55 PM
Ram Krishna Singh said...: Thanks, Friends, for your kind words about the tanka.
R K; February 26, 2008 at 11:51 AM