tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8586396020834645161.post6740549248688866828..comments2023-04-26T16:01:10.012+02:00Comments on Spring Haiku 2008: Ashihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15257680577844653651noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8586396020834645161.post-45412238810010331772008-02-20T17:11:00.000+01:002008-02-20T17:11:00.000+01:00I like 'moon's thumbprint'. In my mind, if the sk...I like 'moon's thumbprint'. In my mind, if the sky is blue, it's implied that the sun is shining, so L1 falls a little flat for me. <BR/><BR/>Playing with yours:<BR/><BR/>a thumbprint<BR/>on the window pane—<BR/>day moon<BR/><BR/>Strong comparative juxt., John. Nice work.joshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06273213793798540656noreply@blogger.com