Sunday, April 27, 2008

dawn light
nothing else
in the spider web


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lumière de l'aube
rien d'autre
dans la toile d'araignée
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4 comments:

Area 17 said...

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Good simple haiku, another winner! ;-)


all my best,

Alan
35 days to the deadline!
The With Words Online Haiku Competition

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Beatrice V said...

Ohhh this is lovely... just perfect, nothing more than the dawn light.
http://owlnights.blogspot.com/

Beatrice V said...

And this a msg. for Alan, not sure where to post it, so hope you find it here.
Thank for visiting my page. I have submitted -in the past- haikai to WithWords. Your visit was a reminder to do so this year again.(Done!:)
http://owlnights.blogspot.com

Pearl said...

ooh, well put.