Thursday, April 24, 2008

blossoms opening
and my grateful heart, too —
impossibly wide

(Cross-posted - with photo and story -
at But Wait, There's More!)
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2 comments:

said...

blossoms opening = 5
and my grateful heart, too — = 6
impossibly wide = 5

Shouldn't that second line have 7 beats to be a haiku?

April 24, 2008 at 4:10 PM
Pearl said...

counting syllables? seriously?
there's more to haiku. the spirit.

which in this, the exuberance and attention to moment is lovely.

April 26, 2008 at 10:57 PM

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