Thursday, April 24, 2008

blossoms opening
and my grateful heart, too —
impossibly wide

(Cross-posted - with photo and story -
at But Wait, There's More!)


Tor Hershman said...

blossoms opening = 5
and my grateful heart, too — = 6
impossibly wide = 5

Shouldn't that second line have 7 beats to be a haiku?

Pearl said...

counting syllables? seriously?
there's more to haiku. the spirit.

which in this, the exuberance and attention to moment is lovely.