Wednesday, March 12, 2008

what would you wish,
tiny sparrow in a big
pot of clover
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2 comments:

josh said...

I like this, Roswila.

The question is, thankfully, underused in haiku.

A lot of yugen in this. Very mysterious poem that grabs me.

Thank you.

March 15, 2008 at 1:44 AM
Roswila said...

Thanks, Josh. I worry about using quotes of any kind in haiku. But thought this just might work. I've seen questions in (translations of) classic Japanese haiku, but those were by masters of the form. :-)

March 15, 2008 at 3:51 AM

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