Saturday, March 15, 2008

hedge blossoms a motionless cat stares

3 comments:

Pearl said...

ooh, cat as blossom, interesting.

Roswila said...

Ah hah, I hadn't read it that way, Pearl, but it certainly could be, couldn't it? My intent was for blossoms to be a noun, and for the break to come after it. (The cat was starting at the hedges...who knew at what :-D)

jem said...

This is a good example of how one line can sometimes be the perfect form. Well done.