Spring Haiku 2008: Seaside

Monday, March 10, 2008

seaside
we talk about resuming
the affair...
these pools that yesterday
were ocean

Area 17 said...: Wonderful!; March 11, 2008 at 5:04 PM
Beckster said...: This is awesome. You conjure up a wonderful yet devastating image. It's great use of the form, really powerful; March 11, 2008 at 8:30 PM
Roswila said...: Yes, I add my appreciation of this one. I really like how it begins fairly ordinarily and winds up with a unique image.; March 13, 2008 at 12:22 AM
Beatrice V said...: It say so much with so few words, it is is so visual as well. Powerful.; April 29, 2008 at 12:03 AM