Monday, March 10, 2008

Seaside

seaside
we talk about resuming
the affair...
these pools that yesterday
were ocean

4 comments:

Area 17 said...

Wonderful!

Beckster said...

This is awesome. You conjure up a wonderful yet devastating image. It's great use of the form, really powerful

Roswila said...

Yes, I add my appreciation of this one. I really like how it begins fairly ordinarily and winds up with a unique image.

Beatrice V said...

It say so much with so few words, it is is so visual as well. Powerful.